Lyric

The way you wake my soul, you make the gray skies roll away

I’m finding beauty in the fray, in every single word you say

I used to stumble in the dark, a lonely spark without a trace

But then you appeared, erasing all the fear within this space

You held my hand when I was low, you helped the embers start to glow

With every seeds of love you sow, I watch our quiet garden grow

I remember nights of hollow fright, when you became my guiding light

You set the heavy burden right, and kept me steady through the night

You saw the man beneath the mask, you never shied away from the task

Of healing scars I kept inside—there was no more for me to hide

In every tear you dried away, you taught my heart the words to pray

In every shade of blue and gray, you brought the gold back to the day

I’m saying "Thank you" through the miles, a thousand thanks for all your smiles

I’m counting up the grace and styles, the love that spans across the piles

A million times I’ve tried to phrase, the magic in your steady gaze

You set my weary heart ablaze, and guide me through the shifting maze

It’s not enough to speak the line, I’m honored that your heart is mine

A tethered soul, a grand design, in every beat, our stars align

We’ve weathered storms and heavy rain, we’ve shared the weight of all the pain

But in the loss, I found a gain—I found the sunshine in your vein

Forget the past, the broken glass, the shadows that we let them pass

We’re rooted deep within the grass, a love that’s built to hold and last

I’m grateful for the way you see, the better version inside of me

You set the captive spirit free, and gave me back my identity

It isn’t just the grand events, the major milestones, or the rents

It’s every subtle, quiet sense—our love is my best evidence

I’m thankful for the breath you take, for every promise that we make

For every single step we take, for all the paths we choose to break

I’m leaning in to hear you speak, you are the strength when I am weak

The treasure that I used to seek, the summit of my highest peak

I’m saying "Thank you" through the miles, a thousand thanks for all your smiles

I’m counting up the grace and styles, the love that spans across the piles

A million times I’ve tried to phrase, the magic in your steady gaze

You set my weary heart ablaze, and guide me through the shifting maze

It’s not enough to speak the line, I’m honored that your heart is mine

A tethered soul, a grand design, in every beat, our stars align

So here’s the vow, the final score, I couldn't ever ask for more

You are the sea, the wave, the shore—the heart I’m living for and for

A thousand times, a million deep, a promise that I’m bound to keep

Before I close my eyes to sleep, this gratitude is mine to reap

Always yours, through thick and thin, the best place that I’ve ever been

I’m thanking you, my closest friend, until the world comes to an end

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